Tuesday, September 6, 2016

Reading Notes: Public Domain Ramayana Part C

Rama’s seemingly cowardly way of killing Vali is really an interesting twist for a character who has up to now been this extremely noble and indomitable hero. He took on thousands of demons and won and yet now he’s choosing to fight from the shadows. It’s a bit surprising and definitely an interesting writing choice. Keeping promises and fighting nobly face to face seems to have been a pretty big deal up until this point. It’s always a risk in writing when your main character does something that’s seemingly out of character and this is no real exception to that rule. It might be worth trying with my own writing but it’d probably be tricky to do well with just short piece so maybe not.

It’s definitely interesting that it seems like more of the pieces are in verse than before and it makes for a slightly different reading experience than in parts A and B. I’m still hesitant to try writing my own verse form though. Even though it might be good to try, sadly I’ll still probably end up just sticking with prose as I’m more comfortable with it.

I really wanted to comment on Sampati’s story because it seems very similar to the fall of Icarus. Though the motivations are somewhat different and Sampati is injured protecting his brother, it’s still very interesting that the story still has the idea of a character getting too close to the sun and thus being burned. Sampati’s story is very powerful and it would definitely be worth considering to use in my storytelling this week either in theme or perhaps through a retelling.


The sort of amusing way Hanuman gets out of harm’s way is also an almost comic portion of the piece even though it seems like it’s mainly there to show how nimble he is. I could use something similar in storytelling to try to get some light humor going. It’s also interesting how he strikes down a woman to get her out of the way but story makes sure to tell the reader that he was gentle about it which almost seems oxymoronic. I feel like you could retell his little adventure from a rather humorous standpoint and still stay true to the source material.

Bibliography: Public Domain Ramayana, Link

File:The golden abode of King Ravana India.jpg
(The golden abode of King Ravana, wikimedia commons)

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